People buy more organic foods than
conventional food, because it is healthier and safer. One of many reasons why it's better is, cannibalism, it is unacceptable in organic morals, which correlates with
a disorder of "Mad Cow Disease". We should switch our eating habits to healthy,
yet organic foods instead of processed items such as fast food markets. Based on a article, in 2011
about 78% of people invested their money to buying organic foods. Organic
products are harmless, because of the way it is processed in farming growth.
Organic and natural may seem similar,
but they are very much different. The word "organic" specifies the
style of how the farmers grow and process the products, for example fruits,
dairies, meats and vegetables. There is a certain type of way to growing the
plants, seeds they use are free of (GMO) genetically modified organism. According to an article, organic does a lot
of composting or uses manure as a natural fertilizer to feed the plants and soil. When it comes to our dairy and meats, organic growing doesn't have factories nor chemicals, where they make
the animals grow faster or suffocate them into one small facility, which I read
and watch in the meatrix. Organic growth in meat, has the animals free of open
space and has them grow naturally
on their own. The animals are in a non-toxic environment , which helps downsize
diseases and are on a stabilized diet.
Organics
may be healthier, but the pricing of their products are higher than
conventional foods. Their items are
expensive because more labor is being put in compared to conventional , since there are
no chemicals or antibiotics added to the product, farmers have hands-on working, for instants,
cleaning up polluted water, or hand weeding the plants. Another reason why it's
expensive is, demand over supply. According to the USDA, sales in organic food
increased from $3.6 billion in 1997 to $21.1 billion because people refer to
eating organic instead of conventional food. Organic farms harvest less than
conventional products, and since organic crops are held and shipped in smaller
portions, this causes higher shipping cost since most farms are far from major
cities.
Not only organic foods are a good and healthy, but they can actually save the world. Organic foods would have been the same
price as conventional food if the U.S. and other places would sponsor
to them , there is no support whatsoever for organic farming. The benefit of this
if the U.S was to support, Americans have the option to choose cleaner foods
than the other. Saving the world with organic products means, the used of less
water to growing their plants because no such chemical are added to the farming. Organic
farming has less pollution, it has no petroleum-derived fertilizers, which that
can cause a climate change to the environment.
We must be wise when
choosing our foods. Always select your
items from different sources, to get better nutrients in the body . Eating and
choosing organic food should be the best option for people. Conventional food
pricing is less than organic even though it doesn't have snacks or some foods
that you're used to in regular supermarkets, but the point is to eating
healthier and knowing that it's safe to eat, so it is a bang for your buck.
I forgot it has to be 2000 words. Will write more.
I forgot it has to be 2000 words. Will write more.
1. Overview: The assignment is conformed to the food theme for the class. You have a very clear argument, which is that we should switch to organic food. most of the terms are defined. There's two terms that should be defined: conventional foods and genetically modified organism.
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3. MLA citations: Your internal citations are cited good. You just need to have a works cited page on this blog so it can be easier to look for the articles.
4. Structure: Your paper has good structure. The conclusion , however is a little confusing from the rest of the paper.
5. Style: The paper has great style.
6. Audience: The paper is very informative and i think its interesting to read.
"People buy more organic foods than conventional food" I doubt that is true. You also said that according to an article in your introduction and in many other places in your paper, but what article are you referring to? I like your topic.
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